What is your greatest fear in life?
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I haven\'t lived a long life yet, but I think I had three experiences about greatest fear in life.
>>I haven\'t lived a long life yet, but I think I had three experiences with greatest fear in life.
First, first things I\'ve been through in something. It\'s scary to experience things that I haven\'t experienced in life.
>> First, I\'ve gone through something. It\'s scary to try something I\'ve never done before.
For example, it means having a university entrance interview or an interview with a big company.
Even the same interview seems to have had the biggest impact because the method, people, and pressure are different.
Second, it\'s about the hospital.
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I have experienced three car accident, but I haven\'t had much surgery in my life.
>>I have experienced three car accidents, but I haven\'t had much surgery in my life
When I had my wisdom tooth removed, I had surgery because of tonsil stones, and it was very scary to anesthetize, and it came as a great fear to put a knife on my body.
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>>When I had my wisdom tooth extracted due to tonsil stones, I underwent surgery, and it was terrifying to be anesthetized, and it was terrifying to have a knife placed on my body.
In addition to this experience, it was also a great fear to hear that someone in the family was in the hospital.
There was a time when my father was suddenly hospitalized. During the medical check, a tumor was found in the lungs, and although it was not cancer, it needed to be removed, so he was hospitalized for surgery.
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I had an experience of being so surprised by the story of being hospitalized without knowing anything.
>>I was surprised by the story of being hospitalized without knowing anything.
Third, it\'s a sudden death.
We have experienced the sudden death of our husband of mother\'s second younger sister.
I was embarrassed, and so shocked, and it was a memory I didn\'t want to remember because adults cried so much. So, the third experience is one I don\'t want to go through again.
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