**What is your greatest fear in life?

2015-05-14 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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My greatest fear in my life is dream a bad dream.It makes me scary.Because it is strange.So, when I dream a bad dream I feel bad when I was wake up.It makes me angry. <Diary> Monkey Dacter Monkey Dacter is appear in the Night at the Museum movie.Dacter is charm.And he hit people's face too much.But he is cute and his dance is funny.

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Hi [이름] ^^   Thank you for making you homework today. Thank you for answering the question that I gave you. Now, I know that you are scared of bad dreams. Even me actually. :)   In your diary, you mentioned Monkey Dacter. hehe.I know him. You are right! He is funny. :)   Night at the Museum is a funny movie and I am pretty sure that you enjoyed the movie pretty much.^^ :)   See you in our next class, [이름]. :) Take care! ^^   ~~T.Kris     My greatest fear in my life is dream a bad dream. >> My greatest fear in life is having bad dreams. It makes me scary. >> It makes me horrified. Because it is strange. >> Correct OR: >> Because it is spooky. So, when I dream a bad dream I feel bad when I was wake up. >> So, when I dreamt of a bad dream, I felt bad when I woke up. It makes me angry. >> Correct<Diary>Monkey Dacter Monkey Dacter is appear in the Night at the Museum movie. >> Monkey Dacter appears in the movie, Night at the Museum. Dacter is charm. >> Dacter is charming. OR: >> Dacter is a charming monkey. And he hit people\'s face too much. >> And he hit people\'s faces too much. But he is cute and his dance is funny. >> Correct

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