What is your greatest strength?

2017-06-20 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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Hi Rose, How a u today? I could just find two of my strength.Please check it out. See you later. -> I do not hesitate to learn something new related in my field. While I was studying at College, it’s a such shame I never got a chance to learn Spring framework. I think Spring is the most important framework for java software developer, so I proceed a project to understand the Spring framework by myself. Through the project, I could understand how the framework is working. ->I am not afraid of facing a challenge. When I worked at previous company, I participated in system upgrade. At that time, I voluntarily participated in that project whereas, other co-workers were reluctant. I understand why they avoided joining the project because I had to do a lot of things during the project. However, it was a really good chance for me to experience a lot of things from the project.

강사 첨삭

Good morning^^

I am better than yesterday, Mr. [이름], how about you?

Thank you for coming up with these answers~

These are good; but let\'s add some later~

Hi Rose,
>>CORRECT!
How a u today?

>>How are you today?
 I could just find two of my strength.

>> I could just find two of my strengths.
Please check it out. See you later.
>>CORRECT!
-> I do not hesitate to learn something new related in my field.

>>CORRECT!

While I was studying at College, it’s a such shame I never got a chance to learn Spring framework.

>>While I was studying at college, it’s a such shame I never got a chance to learn Spring framework.

I think Spring is the most important framework for java software developer, so I proceed a project to understand the Spring framework by myself.

>>I think Spring is the most important framework for Java software developer, so I proceed a project to understand the Spring framework by myself.

 Through the project, I could understand how the framework is working.
>>CORRECT!
->I am not afraid of facing a challenge.

>>CORRECT!
When I worked at previous company, I participated in system upgrade.

>>When I worked at my previous company, I participated in system upgrade.
At that time, I voluntarily participated in that project whereas, other co-workers were reluctant.

>>At that time, I voluntarily participated in that project whereas other co-workers were reluctant.
I understand why they avoided joining the project because I had to do a lot of things during the project.

>>I understand why they avoided joining the project because I had to do a lot of things during that time.

However, it was a really good chance for me to experience a lot of things from the project.

>> However, it was a really good chance for me to experience a lot of things.

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