What is your greatest strength?
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Good morning^^
I am better than yesterday, Mr. [이름], how about you?
Thank you for coming up with these answers~
These are good; but let\'s add some later~
Hi Rose,
>>CORRECT!
How a u today?
>>How are you today?
I could just find two of my strength.
>> I could just find two of my strengths.
Please check it out. See you later.
>>CORRECT!
-> I do not hesitate to learn something new related in my field.
>>CORRECT!
While I was studying at College, it’s a such shame I never got a chance to learn Spring framework.
>>While I was studying at college, it’s a such shame I never got a chance to learn Spring framework.
I think Spring is the most important framework for java software developer, so I proceed a project to understand the Spring framework by myself.
>>I think Spring is the most important framework for Java software developer, so I proceed a project to understand the Spring framework by myself.
Through the project, I could understand how the framework is working.
>>CORRECT!
->I am not afraid of facing a challenge.
>>CORRECT!
When I worked at previous company, I participated in system upgrade.
>>When I worked at my previous company, I participated in system upgrade.
At that time, I voluntarily participated in that project whereas, other co-workers were reluctant.
>>At that time, I voluntarily participated in that project whereas other co-workers were reluctant.
I understand why they avoided joining the project because I had to do a lot of things during the project.
>>I understand why they avoided joining the project because I had to do a lot of things during that time.
However, it was a really good chance for me to experience a lot of things from the project.
>> However, it was a really good chance for me to experience a lot of things.
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