What is your happiest chilhood memory? Describe it and give reasons to explain why it is your happie

2017-03-16 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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My happiest childhood memory is when I was a track and field player. There are two reasons why I choose the memory. The first reason is that I won medals in front of a lot of people, and they gave me a big hand. So, I can't forget such a great feeling. The second reason is that my friends and teachers was proud of me whenever I won medals. I was also really proud of myself. In summary, I will never forget this memory for these reasons.

강사 첨삭

Good day [이름]!

Thank you for your endless diligence in doing your homework. Anyway, I am also proud of your achievements. Show me your medals next time.^^

Have a wonderful day!^^

~Kelly^^

My happiest childhood memory is when I was a track and field player.

>> Correct.

OR:

>> My happiest childhood memory is when I became a track and field player.

There are two reasons why I choose the memory.

>> Correct.

The first reason is that I won medals in front of a lot of people, and they gave me a big hand.

>> The first reason is that I won medals and I received the awards in front of a lot of people, and they gave me a big hand.

So, I can\'t forget such a great feeling. 

>> Correct.
The second reason is that my friends and teachers was proud of me whenever I won medals.

>> The second reason is that my friends and teachers were proud of me whenever I won medals.

I was also really proud of myself.

>> Correct.
In summary, I will never forget this memory for these reasons.

>> Correct.

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