What is your happiest moment?
학생이 쓴 원문
My happiest moment is when I travel with my family or friends or girlfriend anywhere. and when I hang out with children. For example playing soccer, meeting nephew. I really love children It\'s because I grew up receiving a lot of love, So, I should give them a love.
강사 첨삭
You really have a nice and touching answer, [이름]! I am happy that you have lived in a happy family and environment.-Faith-
My happiest moment is when I travel with my family or friends or girlfriend anywhere. >> My happiest moment is when I travel with my family or friends or girlfriend anywhere.
and when I hang out with children.
>> Also, when I hang out with children.
For example playing soccer, meeting nephew.
>> For example, playing soccer and meeting my nephew.
I really love children It\'s because I grew up receiving a lot of love, So, I should give them a love.
>> I really love children because I grew up receiving a lot of love, so I should give them love, too.
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