What is your hatest food and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
My hastest food is soup with radish.
When I was young, my mother cooked it.
Especially, I didn\'t like the textures of the radish somthing like smooth.
Moreover, the taste of the radish is a little bit greesy.
because the soup was made with beef.
When I was young, I didn\'t like all kinds of meat.
Of course, nowadays, I like the kind of meat.
While I am getting older, little by little, the food which I didn\'t like gets good food.
Still, I don\'t like kinds of radish soup.
So I try not to force my daughter to eat some hate food.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Yes, when we were children, we were picky eaters but that slowly changes as we grow up. :)
My hastest food is soup with radish.
When I was young, my mother cooked it.
Especially, I didn\'t like the textures of the radish somthing like smooth.
Moreover, the taste of the radish is a little bit greesy.
because the soup was made with beef.
When I was young, I didn\'t like all kinds of meat.
While I am getting older, little by little, the food which I didn\'t like gets good food.
Still, I don\'t like kinds of radish soup.
So I try not to force my daughter to eat some hate food.
>> The hatest food is soup with radish.
When I was young, my mother cooked it.
>> When I was young, my mother cooked it all the time.
Especially, I didn\'t like the textures of the radish somthing like smooth.
>> I especially didn\'t like the smooth texture of radish.
Moreover, the taste of the radish is a little bit greesy.
>> Moreover, the taste of the radish is a little bit greasy.
because the soup was made with beef.
>> It\'s because the soup was made with beef.
When I was young, I didn\'t like all kinds of meat.
>> CORRECT
Of course, nowadays, I like the kind of meat.
>> Of course, nowadays, I like them already.
While I am getting older, little by little, the food which I didn\'t like gets good food.
>>While I am getting older, little by little, I start liking these kinds of food.
Still, I don\'t like kinds of radish soup.
>> Radish soup is an exception.
So I try not to force my daughter to eat some hate food.
>> So, I try not to force my daughter to eat foods that she hates.
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