What is your idea about Christmas?
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^,
How\'s your Tuesday going so far?
I hope you had a nice day.
Thanks for sharing your plans for Christmas. ^^,
I\'m sure you and your girlfriend will have a wonderful time together!
Do you also give gifts to each other?
Do people in Korea also have Christmas trees inside their houses?
I\'m just curious. :D
Anyway, enjoy the rest of your day [이름]!
Take care of yourself! :)
--- Teacher Jacey :)
This coming cristmas, I would like to hang out with my girlfriend.
>> This coming Christmas, I would like to hang out with my girlfriend.
OR
I would like to spend Christmas with my girlfriend.
We both like hip-hop music so we are planning to reservate concert in seoul.
>> We both like hip-hop music so we are to go to a concert in Seoul.
OR
We both like hip-hop music so we are planning to reserve tickets for an upcoming concert in Seoul.
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