What is your idea about Christmas?

2016-12-06 · 첨삭 강사 Jacey

학생이 쓴 원문

This coming cristmas, I would like to hang out with my girlfriend. We both like hip-hop music so we are planning to reservate concert in seoul.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^,

How\'s your Tuesday going so far?

I hope you had a nice day.


Thanks for sharing your plans for Christmas. ^^,

I\'m sure you and your girlfriend will have a wonderful time together!


Do you also give gifts to each other?

Do people in Korea also have Christmas trees inside their houses?

I\'m just curious. :D


Anyway, enjoy the rest of your day [이름]!

Take care of yourself! :)


--- Teacher Jacey :)



This coming cristmas, I would like to hang out with my girlfriend.

>> This coming Christmas, I would like to hang out with my girlfriend.

OR

I would like to spend Christmas with my girlfriend.



We both like hip-hop music so we are planning to reservate concert in seoul.

>> We both like hip-hop music so we are to go to a concert in Seoul.

OR

We both like hip-hop music so we are planning to reserve tickets for an upcoming concert in Seoul.

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