What is your idea of a perfect vacation?

2021-08-19 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I think a perfect vacation is rest. At Good hotel, late wake up. Time I want to eat meal of hotel. And going swim and nap. But I think it would be good to do things I can’t try in everyday life. For example, going to see and valley. I goning to Other local.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^

Perfect vacation is from where you get energy to burn fuel after coming back, from where you have memories to cherish later when you are down, from where you can get to do what you like with no time limit. Good choice! :)

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I think a perfect vacation is rest.

>> I think a perfect vacation is resting in a good hotel and waking late in the morning.

At Good hotel, late wake up.

>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.

Time I want to eat meal of hotel. And going swim and nap.

>> I want to eat, sleep and take a nap in a hotel.

But I think it would be good to do things I can’t try in everyday life.

>> I think it would be good to do things I don\'t usually do on an everyday basis.

For example, going to see and valley.

>> For example, I would like to go in a valley.

I goning to Other local.

>> I also want to go to another local place.

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