what is your idea of a perfect weekend?
학생이 쓴 원문
A perfect weekend is about relaxing and doing things I enjoy.
Spending time with my family outdoors, like eating out,taking a walk in a park can be so refreshing for me.
When I sometimes have a hard time during weeks, I want to stay at home alone, like reading books or watching movies I like
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [Name]! Your idea of a perfect weekend sounds so peaceful and fulfilling. It\'s great how you find balance between spending quality time outdoors with your family and also having moments of solitude to recharge.
-T. Sonny
A perfect weekend is about relaxing and doing things I enjoy.
>>Correct!
Spending time with my family outdoors, like eating out,taking a walk in a park can be so refreshing for me.
Spending time with my family outdoors, like eating out,taking a walk in a park can be so refreshing for me.
>>Spending time with my family outdoors, like eating out or taking a walk in the park, is very refreshing for me.
When I sometimes have a hard time during weeks, I want to stay at home alone, like reading books or watching movies I like
When I sometimes have a hard time during weeks, I want to stay at home alone, like reading books or watching movies I like
>>When I have a hard time during the week, I prefer staying at home alone, reading books or watching movies I like.
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