What is your idea of the perfect day? Answer in 5 sentences or more.
학생이 쓴 원문
My idea is do everything that you like it. It makes you perfect day
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
You can make all your days perfect.
Just make sure that you do your duties as a student.
Manage your time wisely and you can have fun every day.
Try enjoying your studies as well.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
My idea is do everything that you like it.
>> My idea of a perfect day is doing everything that i like.
It makes you perfect day
>> That would truly make it a perfect day.
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