What is your ideal family?
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Well, my ideal family that I believe is to not interfere with each other. Because I\'ve lived with grandmother who has an Alzheimer, so she tends to ask me about something like Did you get dinner? When will you come back to home ? and etc. I knew that don\'t think about it as written it, but sometimes when I got exhausted I could feel that makes me angry and don\'t want to come back to home. So I personally think it\'s important that they should understand each other.
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Happy Thursday, Elic! Life at work and at home is so much HAPPIER when you speak and act with kindness. Share a smile and make it a great day. ^^
Well, my ideal family that I believe is to not interfere with each other. Because I\'ve lived with grandmother who has an Alzheimer, so she tends to ask me about something like Did you get dinner?
>> My ideal family is a peaceful and loving family. I live with my grand mother who has an Alzheimer\'s disease so she tends to ask me a lot of things over and over again.
But sometimes when I got exhausted I could feel that makes me angry and don\'t want to come back to home.
>> When I\'m exhausted, simple things like asking questions many times can make me angry. Sometimes I feel that I don\'t want to come home.
So I personally think it\'s important that they should understand each other.
>> So, I personally think that to have a perfect family, the whole members should understand each other.
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