What is your ideal family structure in South Korea?
학생이 쓴 원문
My ideal family structure in South Korea is a closer family. They have meals together. They respect and suppport each other through daily conversation, and their relationship is very precious.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Jane!
Family structure means the members of the family. Below, you discussed the family set up of your family. Nevertheless, your answer are the foundations of a family with values and traditions as well as harmony and respect.
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-T. Donna~
>> My ideal family structure in South Korea is a closer family. They have meals together. They respect and support each other through daily conversation, and their relationship is very precious. Very good sentences!
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