What is your ideal home?

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Teacher ELLY.

What is your ideal home?

Do you mean ideal environment around house or a ideal relationship between family members?

>>Do you mean about the ideal environment around the house? Or about the ideal relationship between family members?

I have been living in apartment since I got married.

>>I have been living in an apartment since I got married.

Living in apartment is convenient, comfort and so on.

>>Living in an apartment is convenient, comfortable, etc.

However, there are a lot of conflicts between neighbors such as a house upstairs and downstairs.

>>However, there are a lot of conflicts between neighbors, particularly between the ones upstairs and downstairs.

People have noise complaint issues even if people are just walking in their living and some people are having a pets at home that occur noise issues and hygiene problem.

>>People have noise complaints and issues, even if it is someone just walking in their living rooms. And some people have pets at home that cause noise issues and hygienic problems.

As a father having a young children, I would live in the detached house with big garden, because I want my children to play any places, even living room or rooms.

>>As a father having young children, I would prefer to live in a detached house with a big garden, because I want my children to play anywhere, even in the living room or in any of the rooms.

Parents in Korea must warn their children to be careful while they are staying at home.

CORRECT!

or>>Korean parents should warn their children to be careful even when they are at home.

This is really stressful and ridiculous situation.

>>This is really a stressful and a ridiculous situation.

I think that it is almost impossible for children staying home without any noise.

>>I think that it is almost impossible for children to stay home without creating any noise.

Children get easily stressed and parents also get stressed whenever they give children lecture not to make noise at home. 

>>Children get easily stressed and parents also get stressed whenever they give children a lecture not to make noise at home.