What is your ideal partner? What qualities do you look for in your dream partner/wife?
학생이 쓴 원문
An ideal partner that I guess is who is a punctual person. It\'s because making on time can show up your respectation to other people. One of critical way to build a trust among the people. Also, That comes with a solid bond.
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- Teacher Raven
>> I guess, an ideal partner for me is someone who is punctual.
It\'s because making on time can show up your respectation to other people.
>> It\'s because being on time can show your respect for other people.
One of critical way to build a trust among the people.
>> That\'s one of the critical way to build trust among people.
Also, That comes with a solid bond.
>> Correct.
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