What is your ideal school/university?

2021-02-03 · 첨삭 강사 Faith

학생이 쓴 원문

My ideal school is near in nature. I think people is get good think from nature, so I always look for school\'s backyard, garden, and forest.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]! Thank you for completing your homework for today! You are right! It\'s always wonderful to be in nature! -Faith-
My ideal school is near in nature.
>> My ideal school is near to the nature. 
I think people is get good think from nature, so I always look for school\'s backyard, garden, and forest.
>> I think people get good thinking from nature, so I always look for school backyard, garden and forest. 

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