What is your ideal summer camp?
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I think the ideal summer camp is swimming and sleeping one night a long time ago I bitten by a bug while sleeping one night.
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What is your ideal summer camp?
I think the ideal summer camp is swimming and sleeping one night a long time ago I bitten by a bug while sleeping one night.
>> I think my ideal summer camp is swimming and sleeping for one night because a long time ago, I was bitten by a bug while sleeping during summer camp.
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