What is your ideal vacation?
학생이 쓴 원문
Wouldn\'t my ideal vacation be a really realxing vacation?
I think it would be good to go abroad and enjoy a quiet vacation at a luxury hotel or resort with a beacutiful view of the beach.
Also, I think it would be good to have a fun and happy time with my family while eating delicious food.
강사 첨삭
Hi!
Thank you for sharing your ideal vacation with me.
I hope we could have one soon! ^^
~ Teacher Gina
Wouldn\'t my ideal vacation be a really realxing vacation?
>> Wouldn\'t my ideal vacation be a really relaxing one?
I think it would be good to go abroad and enjoy a quiet vacation at a luxury hotel or resort with a beacutiful view of the beach.
>> I think it would be good to go abroad and enjoy a quiet vacation at a luxury hotel or resort with a beautiful view of the beach.
Also, I think it would be good to have a fun and happy time with my family while eating delicious food.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: Spending joyful moments with my family while enjoying tasty meals would make the trip even better.
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