What is your ideal workplace?
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In Korea, there is a funny saying, \"less work and earn a lot of money.\"
Accordingly, it is considered an ideal workplace if three conditions are met.
First, a job with a high salary.
As many people think a job that can make a lot of money is a good job, I think it is an ideal job if you have a high salary. You can make extra money, but it\'s easy to work and a place with a lot of self-authority, right?
Second, workplaces with a good welfare environment for employees.
These days, a new word \"work-life balance\" is emerging in many Koreans. It is a compound word of work and balance, which means that they prefer a job where work and family and work and individual time. In addition, it would be nice if it was a work place that respects employees\' work-life balance and cares for employees.
Thrid, a workplace with a free atmosphere.
A free atmosphere is not a workplace that doesn\'t matter if you are rude to people. I\'m talking about a workplace where you can freely come up with ideas.
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Hi!
Wow! You gave me such nice answers. It would be so lovely to work in such a place. ^^
~ Teacher Gina
In Korea, there is a funny saying, \"less work and earn a lot of money.\"
>> In Korea, there is a funny saying that goes, \"Less work and earn a lot of money.\"
Accordingly, it is considered an ideal workplace if three conditions are met.
>> CORRECT.
First, a job with a high salary.
>> CORRECT.
As many people think a job that can make a lot of money is a good job, I think it is an ideal job if you have a high salary.
>> CORRECT.
You can make extra money, but it\'s easy to work and a place with a lot of self-authority, right?
>> You can make extra money, have an easy workload, and a place with a lot of autonomy, right?
Second, workplaces with a good welfare environment for employees.
>> CORRECT.
These days, a new word \"work-life balance\" is emerging in many Koreans.
>> These days, a new word, \"work-life balance\" is emerging among many Koreans.
It is a compound word of work and balance, which means that they prefer a job where work and family and work and individual time.
>> It is a compound word of \"work\" and \"balance,\" meaning that people prefer a job where work, family, and personal time are balanced.
In addition, it would be nice if it was a work place that respects employees\' work-life balance and cares for employees.
>> In addition, it would be nice if it were a workplace that respects employees\' work-life balance and cares for them.
Thrid, a workplace with a free atmosphere.
>> Third, a workplace with a free atmosphere.
>> Third, a workplace with a free atmosphere.
A free atmosphere is not a workplace that doesn\'t matter if you are rude to people. I\'m talking about a workplace where you can freely come up with ideas.
>> CORRECT.
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