What is your ideal world that you want to live in?

2015-07-13 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

I think I know the person who listened to my trouble makes is relax. I had a problem with friends and I talked the situation she gave me some advice then I was reconciled. I can`t live in the ideal world right now. I hope that will come true in a timely manner.

강사 첨삭

Here we go with the continuation Ji Yu. You are very lucky you have a very open communication with your mom. I hope you can continuously keep that bond that you have until you get older. Keep safe~ ~~Teacher Erine~~ I think I know the person who listened to my trouble makes is relax. >> I think knowing the person who listens to me makes me relax. I had a problem with friends and I talked the situation she gave me some advice then I was reconciled. >> When I have problems with my friends, I talk about the situation and she gives me some advice that makes me reconcile. I can`t live in the ideal world right now. >> Correct I hope that will come true in a timely manner. >>Correct

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