What is your ideal world that you want to live in?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think I know the person who listened to my trouble makes is relax. I had a problem with friends and I talked the situation she gave me some advice then I was reconciled. I can`t live in the ideal world right now. I hope that will come true in a timely manner.
강사 첨삭
Here we go with the continuation Ji Yu.
You are very lucky you have a very open communication with your mom.
I hope you can continuously keep that bond that
you have until you get older.
Keep safe~
~~Teacher Erine~~
I think I know the person who listened to my trouble makes is relax.
>> I think knowing the person who listens to me makes me relax.
I had a problem with friends and I talked the situation she gave me some advice then I was reconciled.
>> When I have problems with my friends, I talk about the situation and she gives me some advice that makes me reconcile.
I can`t live in the ideal world right now.
>> Correct
I hope that will come true in a timely manner.
>>Correct
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