What is your image of a palatial home? Describe it in as much detail as you can.

2014-09-23 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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At first, I want a yard and a garden in my house. And swimming pool is better if possible. Beside my house,

강사 첨삭

Your palatial home is starting to come to life, Sir Augustine, so better finish putting to words what you have there on your mind.

I would want to see it in person as well. That would be so grand!!!

Now I can\'t wait for it. LOL

Let\'s look forward to it then Sir Augustine. Thanks for sending this while we were having the class. LOL

Have a safe afternoon, Sir!

_Klein

At first, I want a yard and a garden in my house.
>>At first, I wanted a yard and a garden in my house. [way back then]

>>First, I want a yard and a garden in my house. [your priority]
And swimming pool is better if possible.Beside my house,
>>And a swimming pool beside my house is better if possible.

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