What is your most dangerous experience in life?
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Not long after I joined the this company, after the plane landed, I had to direct it to the designated location, maybe it\'s because it\'s my first time, but I stopped a long way back from the line. So I think it was a dangerous experience because I was afraid I\'d get fired. :)
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Hi !
That is dangerous.
Not long after I joined the this company, after the plane landed, I had to direct it to the designated location, maybe it\'s because it\'s my first time, but I stopped a long way back from the line.
>>Not long after I joined the this company, I was supposed to direct a landing airplane to it\'s designated location. Maybe it\'s because it was my first time, but I stopped a long way back from the line.
So I think it was a dangerous experience because I was afraid I\'d get fired. :)
>> CORRECT
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