What is your most indispensable possession and why?

2015-09-18 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

I like to keep memories, I have a little box which is full of memories that just make life full of joy, happiness, and even sadness. There are various things in there such as letters from my friends, middle school teachers, and my father when I was in the military, medals that I got awarded from various contests, copies of licenses and certificates, applications forms for job hunting and so on. Once I used to keep letters and photographs of ex-girlfriends who I dated.However, I disposed all of them before getting married. Albums are also one of the indispensable possessions, although I don’t have many because I don’t like to take pictures. When I occasionally look at the photographs, they remind me of good times of my youth. I also still have diaries that I kept until I was in my early 30’s. I used to write down my feelings and something about significant events that happened around me.Especially when I felt down or had a difficult time, I expressed my feelings in the form of diary.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon Sir [이름]!

Wow! You surprised me!

I also keep photos of my friends and classmates since kindergarten. Hihihi.

My mom is fond of taking pictures and there are a lot of photo albums at home.

I guess there are about 60 of them in the living room.

Thanks for sharing a lot of things with me.

Talk to you soon.

Teacher Nina


I like to keep memories, I have a little box which is full of memories that just make life full of joy, happiness, and even sadness.

>> correct

There are various things in there such as letters from my friends, middle school teachers, and my father when I was in the military, medals that I got awarded from various contests, copies of licenses and certificates, applications forms for job hunting and so on.

>> There are various things in there such as letters from my friends, middle school teachers and my father when I was in the military. There are also medals from various contests, copies of licenses, certificates, applications forms for job hunting and so on.

Once I used to keep letters and photographs of ex-girlfriends who I dated.

>> I once kept letters and photographs of my ex-girlfriends and the girls who I dated.

>> OR: I used to keep letters and photographs of my ex-girlfriends and the girls who I dated.

However, I disposed all of them before getting married.

>> correct

Albums are also one of the indispensable possessions, although I don’t have many because I don’t like to take pictures.

>> correct

When I occasionally look at the photographs, they remind me of good times of my youth.

>> correct

I also still have diaries that I kept until I was in my early 30’s.

>> correct

I used to write down my feelings and something about significant events that happened around me.

>> correct

Especially when I felt down or had a difficult time, I expressed my feelings in the form of diary.

>> correct

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