What is your most indispensable possession and why?
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Good afternoon Sir [이름]!
Wow! You surprised me!
I also keep photos of my friends and classmates since kindergarten. Hihihi.
My mom is fond of taking pictures and there are a lot of photo albums at home.
I guess there are about 60 of them in the living room.
Thanks for sharing a lot of things with me.
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Teacher Nina
I like to keep memories, I have a little box which is full of memories that just make life full of joy, happiness, and even sadness.
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There are various things in there such as letters from my friends, middle school teachers, and my father when I was in the military, medals that I got awarded from various contests, copies of licenses and certificates, applications forms for job hunting and so on.
>> There are various things in there such as letters from my friends, middle school teachers and my father when I was in the military. There are also medals from various contests, copies of licenses, certificates, applications forms for job hunting and so on.
Once I used to keep letters and photographs of ex-girlfriends who I dated.
>> I once kept letters and photographs of my ex-girlfriends and the girls who I dated.
>> OR: I used to keep letters and photographs of my ex-girlfriends and the girls who I dated.
However, I disposed all of them before getting married.
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Albums are also one of the indispensable possessions, although I don’t have many because I don’t like to take pictures.
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When I occasionally look at the photographs, they remind me of good times of my youth.
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I also still have diaries that I kept until I was in my early 30’s.
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I used to write down my feelings and something about significant events that happened around me.
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Especially when I felt down or had a difficult time, I expressed my feelings in the form of diary.
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