What is your most luxurious possession?
학생이 쓴 원문
As for me, the most luxurious possession is my bag.
I like collecting bags, but it is hard to do this because the bags that I love are too expensive to collect this.
Nevertheless, I have bought one that is one of these, so it is very precious and luxurious for me at the same time.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]!
Thank you for writing once again! Your grammar has greatly improved as well! I am so happy to read something you wrote now that you are in the U.S. I hope that you continue to write so we can always see your growth.
Well done here on your output! See you again in class tomorrow.
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
I like collecting bags, but it is hard to do this because the bags that I love are too expensive to collect this.
>>I like collecting bags, but it is hard to do this because the bags that I love are too expensive to collect.
Nevertheless, I have bought one that is one of these, so it is very precious and luxurious for me at the same time.
Nevertheless, I have bought one that is one of these, so it is very precious and luxurious for me at the same time.
>> Correct!
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