What is your most traumatic experience?
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My most traumatic experience is that my daddy got an accident. When I was a student, I came back at home after school. Normally, there was my daddy at home. But no matter how long I wait, he won\'t come. And then I remember being shocked when I got a call from the hospital. Fortunately, he\'s okay now.
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Hi Elic!
Oh! What happened to him? What kind of accident was it?
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My most traumatic experience is that my daddy got an accident.
>> My most traumatic experience was when my dad got into an accident.
When I was a student, I came back at home after school.
>> It happened when I was a student. I came back home from school at that time.
Normally, there was my daddy at home.
>> Normally, my dad would be at home at that time.
But no matter how long I wait, he won\'t come.
>> But I waited for a long time and he still hasn\'t come back.
And then I remember being shocked when I got a call from the hospital.
>> CORRECT
Fortunately, he\'s okay now.
>> CORRECT
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