What is your most unforgettable dream and why?

2014-09-25 · 첨삭 강사 Myra

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What is your most unforgettable dream and why? Answer in 5 sentences. ------------------------------------------------------------------ My most unforgettable dream is none other than conception dream while my wife was pregnant for first kid. Back then I saw many swimming big fish in the lake which looks like carp and I caught a biggest fish among them. It was just like reality after being awakened. For reference, in Korea when a carp is seen in conception dream, it means a 'son'. For me I also got a son thanks to this concept dream. :-)

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Mr. [이름], hi there my student!
What an amazing Thursday night!!! (n_n)

Hope everything  is great with you dear.
You are always teachable in class, participative and attentive! Thanks for that!

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Looking forward to talk with you again on Friday!
~~Teacher Myra~~

What is your most unforgettable dream and why?
Answer in 5 sentences.
My most unforgettable dream is none other than conception dream while my wife was pregnant for first kid.
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My most unforgettable dream is none other than a conception dream while my wife was pregnant for our first kid.
Back then I saw many swimming big fish in the lake which looks like carp and I caught a biggest fish among them.
>>Back then, I saw many big fishes in the lake which look like carp, and I caught the biggest fish among them.
It was just like reality after being awakened.
>>It felt real after I woke up.
For reference, in Korea when a carp is seen in conception dream, it means a \'son\'.
>>For reference, in Korea, when a carp is seen in a dream, it means a \'son\' will be conceived.
For me I also got a son thanks to this concept dream. :-)

>>And my dream came true because my wife gave birth to a baby boy, thanks to this dream.

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