What is your most vivid memory of the home where you grew up?
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I lived in a small cozy house when I was a kid.
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There were two rooms in my house.
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In those days, most households suffered from the lack of food.
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Although I don’t remember exactly, my grandparents seemed to borrow some rice and wheat to go through the cold winter until a new harvest season came.
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In the small room, I think 4 or 5 family members lived together.
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At the upper corner of the room, there was a sorghum straw made bin that was quite large and fully filled with sweet photos.
>> Did you mean: At the upper corner of the room, there was a sorghum straw made bin that was quite large and fully filled with sweet potatoes.
They were consumed in lieu of rice.
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When it was cold, we put the sweet photos in the piled snow for a while and peeled and ate them without cooking when we were fed up with eating cooked photos.
>> Did you mean: When it was cold, we put the sweet potatoes in the piled snow for a while, peeled and ate them without cooking when we were fed up with eating cooked photos.
We felt it was delicious because there were no other snacks at that time.
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Recalling those days, we lived in poverty and it was tough to live.
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We had to worry about the next meal.
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However, my parents and grandparents sacrificed their lives and loved us so much.
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It was the thing that happened only 40 years ago.
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