What is your must-have item when traveling? Why?
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When I go to travel, I bring a iced box. I fill beverage and food in iced box.
And It is very useful. Because when buy a regional food, it can bring fresh condition.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Emily! I must say that your style is very unique and practical. I got an idea from you. Thank you!-Faith-
When I go to travel, I bring a iced box. >> When I travel, I bring an iced box.
I fill beverage and food in iced box.
>> I fill beverages and foods in the iced box.
And It is very useful. Because when buy a regional food, it can bring fresh condition.
And It is very useful. Because when buy a regional food, it can bring fresh condition.
>> And it is very useful because when I buy regional food, it can bring fresh condition.
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