What is your New Year\'s resolution?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
Happy New Year!! and Thank you for your lesson.
Today I was not ready to your lesson and so my talking was not good.
Frenkly, I didn\'t study in English for 5days of holiday. begining of this last year, when I have a time, I did English listening. but these days, I didn\'t do so.
So, My New Year\'s resolution is a level up of English speaking than last year.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Today I was not ready to your lesson and so my talking was not good.
Frenkly, I didn\'t study in English for 5days of holiday. begining of this last year, when I have a time, I did English listening. but these days, I didn\'t do so.
So, My New Year\'s resolution is a level up of English speaking than last year.
Happy New Year! Great year ahead of us!
T. DON
Dear [Name],
Happy New Year!! and Thank you for your lesson.
Happy New Year!! and Thank you for your lesson.
>> CORRECT
Today I was not ready to your lesson and so my talking was not good.
>> Today I was not ready for your lesson so I wasn\'t good in speaking.
Frenkly, I didn\'t study in English for 5days of holiday. begining of this last year, when I have a time, I did English listening. but these days, I didn\'t do so.
>> Frankly, I didn\'t study English for 5 days including the holiday. Earlier this year, when I had time, I tried to listened to English but these past few days, I didn\'t do so.
So, My New Year\'s resolution is a level up of English speaking than last year.
>> So My New Year\'s resolution is to improve or level up my English speaking or conversation better than last year.
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