What is your New Year\'s Resolution?
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One of my New Year\'s Resolutions is to write down my diaries.
As I get older, time flies so fast so I couldn\'t remember well how I am living my days of the year.
I would like to grab and remember my happy experiences, ideas and feelings of this year.
Also, writing diaries makes making decisions or reliving my worries be easier.
That\'s because when I write something down, I could see it clearly and objectively.
강사 첨삭
Happy Monday, [이름]. This is a very good resolution but hard to keep up, but I know you are a determined person. Good job once again with your homework. Have a good one. Talk to you in class later. ~ teacher Jane \\m/
One of my New Year\'s Resolutions is to write down my diaries.
>>> CORRECT =)
As I get older, time flies so fast so I couldn\'t remember well how I am living my days of the year.
>>> As I get older, time flies so fast so I could not remember well how I am living my days of the year.
I would like to grab and remember my happy experiences, ideas and feelings of this year.
>>> I would like to grab and remember my happy experiences, ideas, and feelings of this year.
Also, writing diaries makes making decisions or reliving my worries be easier.
>>> Also, writing diaries makes making decisions or relieving my worries easier.
That\'s because when I write something down, I could see it clearly and objectively.
>>> CORRECT =)
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