What is your opinion about a current politician?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
I think it is difficult to talk about current politician.
It is relation with history. Because it can be a different decision according to national situation.
I think, even if a politician not give a human right to national people, if economic sitation is goes well, many peoples say as like a good country. Opposite case, say as a bad country.
In Korea, Human right was going up more and more, but economic situation was not good, now many people say there are some problem with politician.
These days, there is a election seasion for national assembly. Before COVID19, current politician estimation was very bad but, now it was changed opposite situation. Because of COVID19.
Korea was No. 1 country to prevent it very well.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! :)
I think it is difficult to talk about current politician.
It is relation with history.
I think, even if a politician not give a human right to national people, if economic sitation is goes well, many peoples say as like a good country.
These days, there is a election seasion for national assembly. Before COVID19, current politician estimation was very bad but, now it was changed opposite situation.
Korea was No. 1 country to prevent it very well.
I appreciate your effort in writing a composition.
Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
Dear [Name],
>> CORRECT!
I think it is difficult to talk about current politician.
>> I think it is difficult to talk about current politicians.
It is relation with history.
>> It is related to history.
Because it can be a different decision according to national situation.
>> Because it can be a different decision according to the national situation.
I think, even if a politician not give a human right to national people, if economic sitation is goes well, many peoples say as like a good country.
>> I think, even if a politician did not give human rights to people and the economic situation is going well, many people will think it\'s a good country.
Opposite case, say as a bad country.
>> The opposite case, say it\'s a bad country.
In Korea, Human right was going up more and more, but economic situation was not good, now many people say there are some problem with politician.
>> In Korea, human right is going up more and more, but the economic situation is not good, now many people say there is some problem with the politician.
These days, there is a election seasion for national assembly. Before COVID19, current politician estimation was very bad but, now it was changed opposite situation.
>> These days, there is an election season for the national assembly. Before COVID19, the current politician estimation was very bad but, now it was changed to the opposite situation.
Because of COVID19.
>> CORRECT!
Korea was No. 1 country to prevent it very well.
>> Korea was in top 1 of the countries to prevent it very well.
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