What is your opinion about a four-day week?
학생이 쓴 원문
It would be better to focus for 4 days and rest for 3 days.
강사 첨삭
Hello Kevin!
You are on point but I encourage you to expand your point^^
Other countries had implemented a four-day workweek which means they only work for four days at longer hours like 10 hours a day. It was very effective for some but this kind of policy doe not apply to all establishments :)
Thank you for your diligence in doing your homework.
T. Aki~
It would be better to focus for 4 days and rest for 3 days.
>>> CORRECT!
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