What is your opinion about a four-day week?

2023-01-31 · 첨삭 강사 Jhozel

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Personally, I prefer the four-day week and think many people also agree this opinion. This is because there are no people who want to work more and rest less. However, I also think that plan(a four-day week) is hard to realize. Once the scheme starts, corp.\'s production would become low and curriculum of educational institution would need to be changed. I mean there are a lot of practical problems. If someone suggest idea that can satisfy everyone\'s need, It might be actualized

강사 첨삭

Hello, Kevin!
Thank you for always doing your homework, I appreciate you efforts! 
Anyway, see you later!
-T.Jhozel 

Personally, I prefer the four-day week and think many people also agree this opinion. 
>> Correct! 
This is because there are no people who want to work more and rest less. 
>> Correct!
However, I also think that plan(a four-day week) is hard to realize. 
>> But I also believe that the four-day workweek is difficult to implement.
Once the scheme starts, corp.\'s production would become low and curriculum of educational institution would need to be changed. 
>> Once the plan is in motion, the corporation\'s output would decline, and curriculum changes would be required in educational institutions.
I mean there are a lot of practical problems. 
>> Correct!
If someone suggest idea that can satisfy everyone\'s need, It might be actualized
>>  A suggestion that can meet everyone\'s needs may become a reality.

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