What is your opinion about abortion? Should it continue to be legalized or should it be banned? Why?
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I have never thought about abortion because any of my family hasn\'t had any serious health problem during pregnancy. If my wife or baby had a disease after the embro is implanted in the mother, I would consider an abortion because I want to save my wife first and there is another chance to have a baby. Basically, I don\'t agree the abortion to be legalized but there should be exception for women who have health problem but I want mothers to deliever a baby even if they have already known that the baby might be disable because the baby is one of valuable life. I don\'t think that it is life if there aren\'t any structures of body in the womb. In regard to the unwanted baby, I want mother to deliver a baby even if it is not their intention, but if it they have a baby due to the criminals, I would allow them to remove their baby because mother will have a serious psychological problem.
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~ T. CamilleI have never thought about abortion because any of my family hasn\'t had any serious health problem during pregnancy.
>> I have never thought about abortion because anyone in my family hasn\'t had any serious health problem during pregnancy.
If my wife or baby had a disease after the embro is implanted in the mother, I would consider an abortion because I want to save my wife first and there is another chance to have a baby.
>> If my wife or baby had a disease after the embryo is implanted in the mother, I would consider an abortion because I want to save my wife first and there is another chance to have a baby.
Basically, I don\'t agree the abortion to be legalized but there should be exception for women who have health problem but I want mothers to deliever a baby even if they have already known that the baby might be disable because the baby is one of valuable life.
>> Basically, I don\'t agree that abortion should be legalized but there should be exceptions for women who have health problems, but I want mothers to deliver a baby even if they have already known that the baby might be disabled because the baby is one of the most valuable life.
I don\'t think that it is life if there aren\'t any structures of body in the womb.
I don\'t think that it is life if there aren\'t any structures of body in the womb.
>> I don\'t think that it is life, if there aren\'t any structures of body in the womb.
In regard to the unwanted baby, I want mother to deliver a baby even if it is not their intention, but if it they have a baby due to the criminals, I would allow them to remove their baby because mother will have a serious psychological problem.
>> Regarding the unwanted baby, I want the mother to deliver the baby even if it is not their intention, but if it they have a baby due to the criminals, I would allow them to remove their baby because the mother will have a serious psychological problem.
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