What is your opinion about actors or actoresses who run for a position politics?

2018-11-23 · 첨삭 강사 Shelly

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Many Korean young people want to be a celebrity,because they get a lot of attention, also make a good money. Many celebrity give to them good effects.As you know Korea is a small country,that way people are sensitive for fashions.Years ago celebrity were not well educated. Now days is different stories, they do well everything. That is why I agreed they run for a position politician. For example couple of celebrity’s run politician , they are doing really well.

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Good day, [이름]nah!

There are lots of actors and actresses in our country who are also into politics. Most of them were good politicians having a lower position in the government.

Most of the them who are in a higher position in the government did not do well.  Some were put to jail and some didn\'t like their performances.

I think that they can help the people if they are in a lower position in the government.


Happy Friday. I hope you will enjoy your weekend.


-Teacher Shelly-



Many Korean young people want to be a celebrity because they get a lot of attention, also make good money.

>>> Correct!

Many celebrity give to them good effects.

>>> Many celebrities feel that it is good for them.

As you know Korea is a small country,that way people are sensitive for fashions.

>>> As you know Korea is a small country, that is why people are sensitive for fashions.

Years ago celebrity were not well educated.

>>> Years ago, celebrities were not well educated.
 Now days is different stories, they do well everything.

>>> Nowadays it is a different story, they are good at everything they do.
 That is why I agreed they run for a position politician.

>>> That is why I agree that they run for a position in the government.
 For example couple of celebrity’s run politician , they are doing really well.

>>> Those celebrities are doing well as politicians. 

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