What is your opinion about actors or actoresses who run for a position politics?
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There are lots of actors and actresses in our country who are also into politics. Most of them were good politicians having a lower position in the government.
Most of the them who are in a higher position in the government did not do well. Some were put to jail and some didn\'t like their performances.
I think that they can help the people if they are in a lower position in the government.
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Many Korean young people want to be a celebrity because they get a lot of attention, also make good money.
>>> Correct!
Many celebrity give to them good effects.
>>> Many celebrities feel that it is good for them.
As you know Korea is a small country,that way people are sensitive for fashions.
>>> As you know Korea is a small country, that is why people are sensitive for fashions.
Years ago celebrity were not well educated.
>>> Years ago, celebrities were not well educated.
Now days is different stories, they do well everything.
>>> Nowadays it is a different story, they are good at everything they do.
That is why I agreed they run for a position politician.
>>> That is why I agree that they run for a position in the government.
For example couple of celebrity’s run politician , they are doing really well.
>>> Those celebrities are doing well as politicians.
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