What is your opinion about actors or actresses who run for a position in politics?
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It\'s great to hear your opinion and knowledge about the topic.
You did very well in expressing your thoughts.
Keep up the good work!
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Teacher Sunday
It is not good idea that people including actors and actresses who don’t know well about socio-political agenda nationally and internationally run for a position for accomplishing their goals.
>> It is not a good idea that people including actors and actresses who don’t know well about socio-political agenda nationally and internationally run for a position for advancing their goals.
They are usually having any impure intention such as improving social high-position, getting more money and just personal interest.
>> They usually have impure intentions such as improving their position in the society, getting more money and it\'s all about personal interests.
For this reason I think those who have much more both knowledges and generous personality should become politicians that exudes confidence and has an eye for the public.
>> For these reasons, I think those who are more knowledgeable and generous personality should become politicians that\'s exudes confidence and has an eye for the public.
Korea has been occurred sort of a big deal concerning politics and changing a president these days.
>> Korea has gone through a big deal concerning politics and changing the president these days.
It helps us to think what needs to change to make and live a gratifying life as korean.
>> It helps us to think what needs to change to make and live a gratifying life as Korean.
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