What is your opinion about actors or actresses who run for a position in politics?
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Hi, Mr. [이름]! I really appreciate you sending in your compositions. Thanks for your opinion regarding artists running for politics.
A lot of celebrities in my country also do the same. Although some perform their duties efficiently, I would agree that some do not implement relevant policies.
Anyway, I hope you have an awesome day. I\'ll talk to you soon, Sir. ^_^
~T.Avery
I have seen few actors who run for a position in politics in Korea and USA.
>> I have seen few actors who run for a position in politics both in Korea and USA.
I can\'t say that they are not entitled to be politicians but many celebrities just are up for the election without proving their policies.
>> I can\'t say that they are not entitled to be politicians but many celebrities are just up for the election without proving their advocacies.
I think that they are selected because of their popularity.
>> CORRECT
We had minister of the Ministry of Culture before.
>> We had a minister from the Department of Culture before.
He was famous actor.
>> He was a famous actor.
He appeared many dramas and movies since he was a teenagers.
>> He appeared in many dramas and movies since he was a teenager.
I am the one who love him.
>> I loved him, myself.
OR>> I looked up to him, too.
But I didn\'t like him after he perform his duty as a minister, because he didn\'t have his own policies.
>>CORRECT
OR>> However, I didn\'t like him after he performed his duty as a minister because he hadn\'t implemented his own policies.
I think he was selected because he had a close relationship with ex-president and he might need for ex-president.
>> I think he was selected because he had a close relationship with the ex-president and might have asked for help from him.
In my opinion, celebrities would retire as their current occupation ration than being a politician.
>> In my opinion, celebrities should stay in their current occupation rather than being a politician.
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