What is your opinion about cloning?
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On the Simpsons, the famous animation in the US, Homer, the main character, can take a device to be able to make his clone by chance. He has made some clones and distributed all his tasks to them. However, clones have the same personality with Homer wanting to do nothing and they find the object to make a clone, then they make the others by themselves. The others also make theirs more and... There are thousands of Homers making all messes, so the original fishs all of them with his favourite dought to a velly and finally kill them all. At the end, it shows that the last Homer has no scar which the original got right after the cloning.
This is just a short funny story, but these thoughts come to my mind. My clones would be lazy and useless like me. That’s my 2 cent.
Furthermore, how can I say that they are mine existing only for me regardless what they think and want. Once they start coming up to the world, they are different existences, I cannot insist on the right of property.
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On the Simpsons, the famous animation in the US, Homer, the main character, can take a device to be able to make his clone by chance.
>>CORRECT!
He has made some clones and distributed all his tasks to them.
>>CORRECT!
However, clones have the same personality with Homer wanting to do nothing and they find the object to make a clone, then they make the others by themselves.
>>CORRECT!
The others also make theirs more and...
>>CORRECT!
There are thousands of Homers making all messes, so the original fishs all of them with his favourite dought to a velly and finally kill them all.
>>There are thousands of Homers making all messes, so the original fish all of them with his favourite dought to a velly and finally kill them all.
At the end, it shows that the last Homer has no scar which the original got right after the cloning.
>>CORRECT!
This is just a short funny story, but these thoughts come to my mind.
>>CORRECT!
My clones would be lazy and useless like me.
>>CORRECT!
That’s my 2 cent.
>>That’s my 2 cents.
Furthermore, how can I say that they are mine existing only for me regardless what they think and want.
>>CORRECT!
Once they start coming up to the world, they are different existences, I cannot insist on the right of property.
>>Once they start coming up to the world, there are different existence, I cannot insist on the right of the property.
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