What is your opinion about cloning?

2020-04-06 · 첨삭 강사 Tricia

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I think it have strengths and weaknesses. One of the strengths is that we can keep on getting great objects. And its weakness is that everyone will want to raise it. So, if it is a weak object, it may all disappear if it becomes moldy.

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- Tricia

I think it have strengths and weaknesses.
>> I think it has strengths and weaknesses.

One of the strengths is that we can keep on getting great objects.
>> One of its strengths is that we can keep on getting great objects.

And its weakness is that everyone will want to raise it.
>> CORRECT!

So, if it is a weak object, it may all disappear if it becomes moldy.
>> CORRECT!

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