What is your opinion about divorce?
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It is a complicated issue.
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Nowadays, people do a divorce easier compared with before.
>> Nowadays, people can divorce easier compared with before.
Because we live a life that own life is more important than the others.
>> Because we live in a life where own life is more important than the others.
People do not want a sacrifice anymore even to their partner like their parents. Times have changed.
>> People do not want to sacrifice anymore even to their partner like their parents. Times have changed.
I agree that partly who divorce. Because we struggle to live in this society.
>> I partly agree that one of the reasons why people divorce is because we struggle to live in this society.
So, we do not have time to understand each other.
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However, I want to say that we are not perfect. We can make perfect together.
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