What is your opinion about divorce? Explain in 5sentences
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Divorce is not bad thing if personality and ideal are not right each other.
Even if they have children.
If parents live unhappy life, it will be bad influence to their children.
Divorce is not the end of life.
It could be a new begining.
강사 첨삭
Hello Kate,
Thank you for doing your homework. See you again.
T. Tricia
Divorce is not bad thing if personality and ideal are not right each other.
>> Divorce is not a bad thing, if each other\'s personality and ideals don\'t match.
Even if they have children.
>> CORRECT!
If parents live unhappy life, it will be bad influence to their children.
>> If parents live an unhappy life, it will give bad effects to their children.
Divorce is not the end of life.
>> CORRECT!
It could be a new begining.
>> It could be the beginning of a new life.
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