What is your opinion about fortune telling?
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Hi, [이름]!
Nice composition. I definitely agree with you.
Well, I\'m interested in trying to go to a fortune teller.
However, it gives me negative feeling that I can\'t explain. ^^
Anyway, thank you for sharing your experience.
_Teacher Dianne
I sometimes go to see fortune tellers when I\'m having a hard time.
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Whether it\'s a good or a bad fortune, telling stranger what\'s going on in the difficult situation gives me a sense of psychological stability.
>> Whether it\'s a good or a bad fortune, telling what\'s going on in the difficult situation gives me a sense of psychological stability.
We don\'t have to be too obsessed with the results of the fortune teller.
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>> or: We don\'t have to be too obsessed with the results of the fortune telling.
Because the consequences of life can vary depending on what I choose at every moment.
>> correct
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