What is your opinion about fortune telling
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Sometimes, my mom go to get the fortune telling for our family.
Especially, when we move to a new house or before my exam or my sisterr\'s exam.
Fortune telling is popular in Asia culture and I believe that it helps us to relieve pepple\'s unrest.
When we don\'t have any idea or we don\'t know what we have to do, it will be helpful to our decision. But it is just an advice not an absolute truth.
So, I think fortune telling a kind of counseling.
강사 첨삭
1. Sometimes, my mom go to get the fortune telling for our family.
>>Sometimes, my mom go to get fortune telling for our family.
2. Especially, when we move to a new house or before my exam or my sisterr\'s exam.
>>Especially, when we move to a new house or before my exam or my sister\'s exam.
3.Fortune telling is popular in Asia culture and I believe that it helps us to relieve pepple\'s unrest.
>>Fortune telling is popular in Asian culture and I believe that it helps us to relieve people\'s unrest.
>>Fortune telling is popular in Asian culture and I believe that it helps us to relieve people\'s unrest.
4. When we don\'t have any idea or we don\'t know what we have to do, it will be helpful to our decision.
>>When we don\'t have any idea or we don\'t know what we have to do, it will be helpful for our decision making.
5. But it is just an advice not an absolute truth.
>>CORRECT
OR>>However, it is just a form of advice and not a definite truth.
6. So, I think fortune telling a kind of counseling.
6. So, I think fortune telling a kind of counseling.
>>So, I think fortune telling is a kind of counseling.
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