What is your opinion about people with tattoos?

2022-07-14 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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Absolutely, I strongly agree with that. I have a plan to get a tattoo with my old friend for the friendship. I like that it\'s the meaningful tattoos, but I don\'t like such too many tattoos or meaningless things. I like the right amount. You know?

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Absolutely, I strongly agree with that.

>> I absolutely agree with that.

I have a plan to get a tattoo with my old friend for the friendship.

>> I have a plan to get a tattoo with my old friend for our friendship.

I like that it\'s the meaningful tattoos, but I don\'t like such too many tattoos or meaningless things.

>>I like that it\'s meaningful tattoos, but I don\'t like the ones that are meaningless.

I like the right amount. You know?

>> I like the right amount, you know?

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