What is your opinion about people with tattoos? Explain your answer.

2022-07-14 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

학생이 쓴 원문

These days, tattoos are popular especially young people and women. What We do tattoos at our not only bodies but also our eyelines and eyebrows becomes common. Except those tigers and some letters, I think tattoos is good for our appearance.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! :)

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

These days, tattoos are popular especially young people and women.

>> These days, tattoos are popular, especially to young people and women.

What We do tattoos at our not only bodies but also our eyelines and eyebrows becomes common.

>> We can do other tattoos nowadays already, like tattoo eyeliners and tattooed eyebrows.

Except those tigers and some letters, I think tattoos is good for our appearance.

>> I think tattoos are good for our appearance.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기