What is your opinion about Pre-marital sex?
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I believe that it\'s okay, if there are the right age, contraception and depending on people. But they should get a education of sex. They might have a risk with having a babe. In my country, there\'s not appropriate education of sex. Maybe, I guess it\'s a Confucian culture. So there are a kind of people who are conservative. That\'s why they mind to explain it. I think it\'s an issue between generation X and Z.
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Hi Elic, always believe in yourself. You have the ability to do any kind of work whatever it is easy or tough. So be confident and work hard to get your dream :)
I believe that it\'s okay, if there are the right age, contraception and depending on people.
>> In my opinion, Pre-marital sex is ok as long as they are already at the right age. They can also use different kinds of contraceptive.
But they should get a education of sex.
>> But they should learn sex education.
They might have a risk with having a babe.
>> It is risky for unstable couples to have a baby.
In my country, there\'s not appropriate education of sex.
>> In my country, there\'s no appropriate learning for sex education.
Maybe, I guess it\'s a Confucian culture.
>> Maybe because of Confucianism.
So there are a kind of people who are conservative.
>> So, there are some people who are conservative.
That\'s why they mind to explain it.
>> That\'s why they don\'t mind it.
I think it\'s an issue between generation X and Z.
>> I think opinions differ between generation X and Z people.
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