What is your opinion about teen freedom? To what extent should teenagers have freedom? When should p
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Ohhhhhhh, I can\'t believe a level of this question. That\'s a tough thing, but I would have to say it will be different who are children. If the person who is stubborn and a nocturnal needs to be resctricted, but not doesn\'t need to do it.
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Hello there, Elic. Here are my corrections for today\'s homework. As you may notice I placed corrections for all three, because I noticed that some words were misplaced and some thoughts were a bit unclear. Please study the sentence patterns and the use of words per sentence. You still did a good effort in this one. I noticed how you put in good effort in expres[이름]g your thoughts as well. Please continue what you are doing and your efforts in learning new information and styles of compo[이름]g sentences. Thank you and have a great day!
- Teacher Raven
>> Oh, I can\'t believe the level of this question.
That\'s a tough thing, but I would have to say it will be different who are children.
>> That\'s tough, but I would have to say that it depends on who the children are.
If the person who is stubborn and a nocturnal needs to be resctricted, but not doesn\'t need to do it.
>> If the person is nocturnal and stubborn at the same time, he needs to be restricted to go out, but it doesn\'t mean that he needs to do it.
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