What is your opinion about the article \"Alcohol as Leading Cause of Road Deaths\"
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Of course, I strongly agree with that article. It can be made up of death with me or other people. So I guess we should punish them strongly. But there is a matter in South Korea. The punishment for drunk driving is too weak. It\'s a bullshit that the government will give people who drunk driving 3 chances.
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Thank you for answering the homework Elic! I am very happy of your progress in sentence construction and also your vocabulary. I appreciate your efforts and these will be good practices for you to apply what you have learned in class. Keep it up Elic! :)
>> Correct.
It can be made up of death with me or other people.
>> It can be my own death or other people.
So I guess we should punish them strongly.
>> So, I believe the government should give heavy punishment to drunk people who drive.
But there is a matter in South Korea. The punishment for drunk driving is too weak.
>> However, in South Korea, the punishment for drunk driving is too weak.
It\'s a bullshit that the government will give people who drunk driving 3 chances.
>> It\'s unfair that the government gives violators three chances.
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