What is your opinion about the effects of language barrier between people?
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I don\'t know how many languages exist in our planet. We use it to communicate each other. We can easily see similar words that have diffrent meaning but prononciation is almost same that might lead to miscommunication. In addition, we can\'t express our feeling fully due to the language\'s limitation. All languages have a limited expression so, people sometimes don\'t know how to express their emotion. For example, when we achieve our goal, we just say \"I am happy, it\'s gorgeous and I am pleased etcetera.\". although, we would like to express everything that has in our mind. In contrast, there are many incidents due to mistranslation. It is common to use a translator when we travel abroad. However, it doesn\'t provide correct sentense that result in miscommuincation. That\'s why people should be lenient to forenigners because of language barrier.
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~ T. CamilleI don\'t know how many languages exist in our planet.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I don\'t know how many languages exist around the world.
We use it to communicate each other.
>> We use it to communicate with each other.
We can easily see similar words that have diffrent meaning but prononciation is almost same that might lead to miscommunication.
>> We can easily see similar words that have different meaning but pronunciation is almost the same that might lead to miscommunication.
In addition, we can\'t express our feeling fully due to the language\'s limitation.
In addition, we can\'t express our feeling fully due to the language\'s limitation.
>> CORRECT!
All languages have a limited expression so, people sometimes don\'t know how to express their emotion.
>> CORRECT!
For example, when we achieve our goal, we just say \"I am happy, it\'s gorgeous and I am pleased etcetera.\".
>> For example, when we achieve our goal, we just say \"I am happy, it\'s gorgeous and I am pleased\", etcetera.
although, we would like to express everything that has in our mind.
>> Although, we would like to express everything that is in our mind.
In contrast, there are many incidents due to mistranslation.
>> CORRECT!
It is common to use a translator when we travel abroad.
>> CORRECT!
However, it doesn\'t provide correct sentense that result in miscommuincation.
>> However, it doesn\'t provide correct sentence translation that result to miscommuincation.
That\'s why people should be lenient to forenigners because of language barrier.
>> That\'s why people should be lenient to foreigners because of language barrier.
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