What is your opinion about the effects of using a fan or air conditioner at night?
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
You sure got a whole new electric billing system once the bill has been passed. It would cut down your skyrocketed electricity bill. Hats off to you, Sir [이름]!
~Teacher Eunice
We don\'t have to discuss about the issue you gave me.
>>> Correct!
Air conditioner is vital for keeping our life in the summer in Korea.
>>> Air conditioner is vital for keeping our life during the summer in Korea.
It is unprecedented heat these day.
>>> We are experiencing an unprecedented heat these days.
>>> OR: We are experiencing a tremendous heat these days.
The government in Japan encourage citizens to use the air conditioner when it\'s hot, because many people, especially old guys could die if they didn\'t turn on the air conditioner.
>>> Correct!
However, Koreans are worried about the electricity fee if we use it for a long time.
>>> Correct!
In this matter, members of national assembly are going to prepare to propose a bill about reducing the electricity fee.
>>> In this matter, members of the national assembly are going to propose a bill about reducing the electricity fee.
I hope that we can get the benefit from the law that congressman proposed.
>>> I hope that we can get benefits from the law that the congressmen will propose.
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