What is your opinion about the executive order released against the striking truckers? Is this justi

2022-12-02 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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I think the government\'s punishment is inevitable in this situation. Absolutely, demonstration is the way people can make their voice and recover their own rights. It will lead government to consult with the workers. However, if others\' rights can\'t be guaranteed due to demonstration, it is also big problem. Through truckers\' striking, the building workers are having trouble using cement and delaying their work. Government should protect the public\'s right, so if there is no good cause, they can force cement truckers to work. And the government doesn\'t push all the workers to work. Giving punishment to cement truckers is the optimal to prevent economic deterioration. However, after the urgent situation is solved, there should be discussion between workers and government. The government must do their best to protect cement truckers\' rights until realistic agreement is reached. Maybe increasing salary is the most important part to the workers.

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Thanks for this Mary!

I think the government\'s punishment is inevitable in this situation. 
>>> correct  
Absolutely, demonstration is the way people can make their voice and recover their own rights. 
>>> ORAbsolutely, demonstration is the way people can make their voice be heard and recover their own rights.   
It will lead government to consult with the workers. 
>>>  correct 
However, if others\' rights can\'t be guaranteed due to demonstration, it is also big problem. 
>>>  However, if others\' rights can\'t be guaranteed due to demonstration, it is also a big problem.  
Through truckers\' striking, the building workers are having trouble using cement and delaying their work. 
>>> correct  
Government should protect the public\'s right, so if there is no good cause, they can force cement truckers to work. 
>>> correct  
And the government doesn\'t push all the workers to work. 
>>>  correct 
Giving punishment to cement truckers is the optimal to prevent economic deterioration. 
>>> correct   
However, after the urgent situation is solved, there should be discussion between workers and government. 
>>> correct   
The government must do their best to protect cement truckers\' rights until realistic agreement is reached. 
>>>  correct  
Maybe increasing salary is the most important part to the workers.
>>>  correct  

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